Positive:
The pictures are good quality and well-shot
It looks like a proper magazine that you might see in a shop
The logo of the magazine is effective and looks individual
Negative:
The colour scheme is simple and it doesn't really stand out
Person 2
Positive:
Looks quite mature and sophisticated
Pages look good and well-arranged
It looks very indie
Negative:
Interview is a bit short
Positive:
Looks quite mature and sophisticated
Pages look good and well-arranged
It looks very indie
Negative:
Interview is a bit short
Person 3
Positive:
Contents page looks professional
Artists seem believable / real
Very nice to look at, text is easy on the eyes
Negative:
Interview seems a bit fabricated, one spelling mistake
Taking this feedback into account, I have changed my interview to be more believable and have also made it a bit longer.
Positive:
Contents page looks professional
Artists seem believable / real
Very nice to look at, text is easy on the eyes
Negative:
Interview seems a bit fabricated, one spelling mistake
Taking this feedback into account, I have changed my interview to be more believable and have also made it a bit longer.
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